
Every storyteller knows the power of hooks.
A compelling story grabs the reader and keeps them pulled in so they can’t put down the book until the last page.
Or even better, the reader doesn’t want the story to be over. And not only do they hope it’s a series and can’t wait for the next installment, the story hounds them long after “The End”.
The type of hook varies based on genre. For example, suspense and thrillers tend to start with danger. And mysteries often begin with intrigue.
But the goal of every hook is to make the reader think, “I’ve got to find out what happens.”
Regardless of the initial hook, a “can’t put down” story:
— Needs hooks at the beginning and end of each scene and chapter (at least).
— If the story lags, more hooks that signal “something else bad is about to happen”, are needed.
— The very important back cover (which is usually the online description) is the primary magnet to draw in readers.
The Hound That Hooks
If you haven’t read it, I won’t spoil The Hound of the Baskervilles (1902) for you. But Arthur Conan Doyle skillfully creates a story that hooks and hounds the reader.
His first sentence gets an A+. It sets the hook, orients the reader to the setting, and introduces a POV. And the second sentence digs the hook deeper.
“Mr. Sherlock Holmes, who was usually very late in the mornings, save upon those not infrequent occasions when he was up all night, was seated at the breakfast table. I stood upon the hearth-rug and picked up the stick which our visitor had left behind the night before.”
The hook is set: “Why is Holmes up so early? And who was the visitor?”
And like every masterful writer, Conan Doyle puts a hook at the end of every chapter (and throughout the story) that compels the reader to keep reading.
The Hooks That Hound
Now you know the mystery of hooks that hound — the twists that hint at something unusual, interesting, intriguing, or dangerous.
But writers know hooks aren’t really mysterious at all. Hooks are thoroughly brainstormed and thought out and crafted to grab the reader and keep them reading until the last word.
What stories have hooked you and not let go until “The End”?
The Mystery of Hooks that Hound – What stories have hooked you and not let go? Share on XJoni Vance is an award-winning author of fiction, essay, and poetry. She loves mystery, history, and how God reveals Himself every day.
May God reveal the mystery of His love in your life story.

Great post, Joni! Praying for your writing as you craft your mystery. Blessings!
Thanks for reading, Kim. And thanks for your prayers. Praying for your writing as well.
I loved your descriptions of hooks and how to use them. Very helpful. I’m in the process of reading Lonesome Dove. It’s very secular, but has many great hooks.
Thanks for reading and sharing about what you are currently reading. I’m glad my post was helpful.
Great post!
Thanks for reading and commenting, Tim. I appreciate it!
Freida McFadden’s books. She writes secular mysteries, with more twists than a roller coaster!
Thanks for sharing the info about that author. I appreciate you reading and commenting.